King of the Shadow Walkers

[Actaeon]

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Sample Post - ( Situation - You are raiding the Halo-Bearer King's land, and the heir to your throne gets killed during the raid. What do you do? )

Please make your sample post atleast 2 paragraphs long.

[Fly]

Name - Unaltered Sin
Age - 3
Breed - arabXdraft
Color - black
Sample Post - ( Situation - You are raiding the Halo-Bearer King's land, and the heir to your throne gets killed during the raid. What do you do? )

he was outraged! his heir had been killed. now he was going on a rampage, a mass slaughter spree. blood would surely taint the spotless loam of the lights. Sin was coming. he was going to get revenge - sweet revenge - on the king and queen. he brewed an evil plot in his dark mind....

the stag stood in the darkness, his orbs glittering like a serpent's. silken threads danced about his nape. he tossed his dial to rid his vision of his tassels of his forelock. flints thudded the rocky ground, producing a loud clanging sound. a twisted smile was etched into his maw. no movement or sound did he emit as he stopped pawing, but rather he just stood, watching over his harem, his hock-kisser swaying.his harem? a small band were they, but he knew they were more evil than even the biggest herd of darks, for they were the hell's rejects, the ones who satan couldnt even handle. Sin finally made himself noticeable by stepping from the shadows. his muscles rippled beneath his satiny coat, tainted by the blood of many. would he get another's blood on his coat today? he only hoped. nodding at his queen, his mate, he stretched his legs and walked to her. her [insert color here] coat was stained aswell. he said a few words to the vix'n and smirked. she was just as evil as ever...just like him. their fates were intertwined now, they coulndt be separated. he hoped theyd be together till their deaths, no he knew. he woudl do anything for her; he was her right-hand man. everyone feared this duo, these terrors of the night. they were the duet of hell.

after speaking to her for some time about getting revenge, he turned his attention back to the terrain of the island. his occuli scanned the terra, looking for anything at all that was out of place. and then, satisfied, he crossed the brideges, crossing the line betwixt the lights and darks. he was now going to get his rvenge. he was now going to kill.
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[after he crosses the divide]
his eyes searched out a pool of shimmering fluid, and it caught his interest. what was this? as he came closer, he deciphered the question and realized what it was. with a lick of his maw, he trotted towards it hungrily, lustfully. blood. how he loved it.

flashing pearls in a wicked grin, he slowly trotted with long, graceful strides to where there was a pool of crimson blood, shimmering in the moonlight, overshadowed by wispy clouds. he sniffed at it delicately with paperthins, taking in all the information he could acquire. it seemed to him that it was fae's blood, perhaps a light fae's blood. he wanted to find her, for he knew the blood wasnt old and she could still be alive somewhere...and he wanted to finish her off. lust and the desire to kill overcame him, and with his orbics glowing red like hazy embers, he galloped in fury after the trail of blood left by the injured creature....it took him a while to find her, but after some searching, his occulus found her small, trembling bod. he didnt take his ebon orbs off her...and then he remembered that this was the heir to the light's throne...the beloved soon-to-be queen.


...and there he saw her, a mere filly AT Tthat, trembling in his prescence.she was injured somehow...by what? he didnt know. he flashed a twisted smirk her way and circled her menacingly. his eyes were burning with rage, his heart burning with the need and want to kill this thing, not worthy of his attention. he snorted heartily. she backed herself into a corner, twitching and fidgeting with terror. a horrendous crime would be committed this night. Sin was going to get his wish: Sin was going to kill. and so he thoughtfully munched on the sparse grass, whipcord flicking; ridding him of loitering bloddsuckers, thinking of what he should do to her. make it painful? or kill her right away? Sin knew, and witth slow, deliberate steps, he approached the shivering filly. with an evil grin, he asked "do you know, filly, who you are looking at?"she shook her head slowly. he cackled. "well, you should" he hissed.with his trademark smirk, he smirked at her.just then, a flash of horror and brutal realization came to her mind. everyone knew who Sin was, and if they didnt, when he smirked at them, they would know. she slowly swallowed her last swallow, as sin loomed closer to her.with a rear he was laying on top of her, slowly crushing her innards. then, he threw the weak flicka on his back and carefully aligned her on his rump. with a spectacular buck, he threw her into the air. she landed with a sickening thud. he smiled, satisfied. another kill, another worthless light gone. as he two-beated away on his blood-caked daggers, he knew everyone would know sin had been there by the demented remains of the filly.he had gotten his vengence. theyhad killed his foal, his lineage, he had killed theirs. with a twisted smirk, he hid on a high cliff, towering over the dead foal, to watch the reactions of the lights when they found her....


and then th' deed was done. 'e travelled back to 'is home terra.. Unaltered sin three beated around th' terra. seeing 'is queen, 'e dipped his crown in a slight bow. approaching 'er, 'is bloodcaked daggers struck th' groud with a 'clang'. th' long strides on 'is stong pistons ate up the ground betwxt 'em and in no time, 'e was at 'er side. scars from battles past dotted 'is ebon peltage. hock kisser flicked lazily and harks swiveled 'round 'pon 'is crown. 'is orbs burned a hazy red color since 'e 'ad just returned from a kill. Sin stamped at th' ground boredly with a sharpened flint. tossing 'is dial, 'e gazed through 'is forelock at the band of Hell's Rejects, his harem. 'e sighed. this was where 'e truly belonged, with satan's horses. fresh from a kill, 'e craned 'is dial to see th' blood matted on 'is coat. 'e sighed boredly.

suddenly, a horse stepped from th' treeline. paperthin's flared as 'e charged at th' intruder. no longer could you see 'im, for 'e was hidden in a cloud of 'is own dust. fast as th' wind, 'e twas at th' stag's dial, breathing hot air in 'is face. a twisted smirk formed 'pon 'is kissers. with a hafl-rear, 'e was upon his columns, pinching th' air ferouciously. a ghastly sight twas it. pointing daggers towards th' stallion, in no time 'e had gashed up th' hession. a battlecry echoed throughout th' land. Sin's sharpened hooves ssliced th' stag time and time 'gain, never stopping.

th' light stag never had a chance. turns out, 'e 'ad been sent to kill whomever had killed th' king's daughter.he didnt complete 'is deed. blood twas splattered everywhere. blood pooled 'round 'im. dust and blood caked Sin, caked everything. a gorey sight it twas, only th' darks could manage to look at. he circled th' stallion, daring 'im to move. but 'e couldnt, Sin had killed 'im off real nice. nodding satisfiedly, Sin pronounced 'im dead and spat at th' lifeliss, limp bodice.

"twhat you get when you come into meh lands" 'e hissed at the dead body. satisfied, th' hell-bringer walked a few steps and stooped 'is head to crop th' emerald blades. 'e didnt play by th' rules, no, not Sin. 'e was feared far and wide, as notorious as th' queen 'erslef. 'e resected 'er and revered 'er greatly, and was honored t' be 'er mate. 'e let out an ear-piercing whinny-a hellish sound of triumph.

soon though, 'e became restless. 'e longed to kill. 'gain and 'gain 'e scanned the area for something to kill. something stupid enough t' step into th' land of th' rejects. a wild fire danced in 'is orbs. 'e looked scary and a bit creepy. keeping 'is occuli trained on th' horizon, 'e looked t' th' distance, harks pricked. desire for a kill was overtaking 'im...

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[Fly]

sorry if it's long--its two of my best posts modified and out together. lol

[Actaeon]

Oh no, its not too long at all! In fact, thats how long I expect all the sample posts to be. I will only allow the best of RPer's to have important characters.

I am going to wait until somebody else try's out, or else it wouldn't be fair.

[Fly]

ok, i understand